Hui Moyan.

He has a chance... If he falls in love, of course.
Right, I should be unhappy... Or beautiful?.. Argh.. What's so hard? I've already become a sorceress.. Why can't I be happy?
Finally reaching the place where they met, she stopped and sat down under a tree.
I heard some footsteps.. It's strange.. Hui Moyan appeared later, who is it?
A face suddenly appeared in front of her, and she nearly jumped. It was the Head Disciple of White Mist Peak, Bai Qinglian! She hated her and bullied her for trying to attract the Head Disciple's attention. But now she didn't seem angry... What does she want?
"What are you doing here?" the question sounded simultaneously, and they were silent for a long time after that, only looking at each other.
Suddenly more steps were heard, it was the Head of Demons.
Coming out to them, he only looked at the two girls in slight surprise.
Wasn't she here alone? How could the Head Disciple be here?
Hui Moyan couldn't make a loving face anymore, because... Why are they sitting so close and blushing???
“What are you doing here?” he asked them in surprise, and they all looked at each other in silence.
Have they all been reborn???
"Have you been reborn too? And why are you so close?" the Demon Lord said.

After he submitted a review for this barely written novel, his vision suddenly went dark, he staggered, and fell to the floor.
After a brief wait, he suddenly jumped up from his snow-white bed. Opposite him was a large, full-length mirror with a white frame around it.
Involuntarily looking in the mirror, he was stunned by his appearance.
He was as beautiful as a white lotus. His long, straight, and smooth hair was a rare silvery-white shade. It flowed freely over his shoulders, and fine strands softly framed his face.
Very fair, porcelain skin, a straight, thin nose and a clearly defined chin.
The hanfu was snow-white, and the outer robe was mint-colored.
After standing in shock for a while, he ran to the mirror, not believing his eyes.
How... He couldn't have been reborn?

The Demon Lord had it much easier, but the shock of it didn't go away.
Hui Moyan was reborn. He remembered being blindly in love and acting as if following someone else's script. He remembered the pale green eyes looking at him with indifference.
Perhaps this girl Ye Feixian had intoxicated them both with something, and something very strong, since the Demon Lord himself was chasing after this girl like a lovesick student... What a shame.
But what about Gu Yehui then? Perhaps he's still not intoxicated...
In fact, Gu Yehui had been helping him a lot, even if it wasn't obvious. But then, how did this Madam Ye, as she called herself when they first met, intoxicate Gu Yehui, to the point that he pushed him into the abyss, and with such coldness too? He wouldn't believe it.
He'll go meet "Ms. E" and pretend to be in love. Yes, that's how it will be.

Ye Feixian died in the arms of the Chief Disciple of White Mist Peak, or rather, Gu Yehui stabbed her in the heart for drugging him.
What nonsense??? She didn't do anything, you fell in love with me yourself, didn't you?
Suddenly, she was also reborn, but she was cold because her beloved betrayed her.
She didn't want anything to do with him anymore.. Oh, soon there will be a Demon Lord who is in love with her. This time she will give

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Jet-black, very long, and straight hair. Some of it is gathered under a headdress, while the rest hangs freely along the body, reaching to the knees.
His facial features are masculine and sharp. He has a strong chin, a straight, thin nose, and narrow, penetrating eyes. His gaze is directed to the side, cold and serious.
A luxurious, multi-layered robe in dark tones. The dominant color is deep black, adorned with massive gold embroidery on the shoulders depicting Chinese dragons—a symbol of supreme imperial power.
A bright red (scarlet) inner robe, also covered with intricate gold patterns and ornaments, is visible beneath the black silk. The snow-white collar of the undershirt is visible at chest level.
On her right hand she wears a green jade ring (a gift from Ye Feixian).

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Long, sleek, silver-white (platinum) hair. It falls loosely over her shoulders and back, with a few thin strands softly framing her face.
Very pale, porcelain skin. He has classic, perfect features: a thin, chiseled nose, a sharp chin, and neatly contoured lips of a natural pinkish hue.
Thin, long, dark eyebrows arched high. Elongated eyes with a graceful curve to the lids, a calm, thoughtful, and slightly distant gaze.
He wears a multi-layered robe. The outer cape is pale green, decorated with exquisite gold embroidery featuring floral motifs. Beneath it, a dark collar and a white underdress are visible, contrasting sharply with his light hair.
He has thin, graceful fingers.

YOU'VE DESCRIBED EVERYONE IN AT LEAST 5 PAGES!!! WHAT DID GU YEHUI DO TO YOU? WHAT'S WRONG WITH HIM? Author, you're simply disgusting. (review by Qi Yue)
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Review by LOVES_GUYEHUI111:
This typical novel has garnered hundreds of thousands of likes and compliments. There are a million plot holes! How can you read this so easily? It's disgusting.
And this Ye Feixian! She's a typical Mary Sue!!!
What about Gu Yehui?! He didn't even mention him! Why didn't the author at least mention him as an MCG character? He only appears three times at most! 😡 Isn't that an insult to MCG?
The first time he appears is when he disgraced the main character,
The second, when the main character brought him a gift (an expensive one, by the way!), and he rejected her in front of everyone. (AGAIN😭😭😭)
And the third, when this woman forced him to push the Demon Chief if he wanted to be with her.
This is stupid! Why is he so rarely mentioned? Didn't he do something pretty important by pushing the Demon Lord, huh?!
Even if this Demon Lord didn't do anything wrong, why didn't you write it down, Author?! Why should I guess what he did and didn't do?!
Okay, okay. But why so much mention of the Demon Lord? He's not a mgg! Especially since he died at the end! I'm 100% sure he didn't rape or even lay a finger on the Main Character! I'm sure he didn't even plan to destroy White Lotus Peak! How did a mgg trust the Main Character? She has nothing, no evidence, no leads. JUST HOW DID SHE DO THIS?
This is completely illogical! Author, you yourself described MCG as a super-duper-mega-smart and powerful student on the entire White Mist Peak!!! You didn't even describe how he became that. Why did he trust MCG so easily??????
Okay, fine. I admit. You wrote White Mist Peak very well, almost 11 pages! You described the main character well! You described the Demon Lord very well! But why didn't you describe the main character at least a little bit??? I've searched the entire novel, but I can't find a single word describing the main, damn male character!!!! What the hell, dude?
Okay, okay. "His long white hair fluttered in the wind. His white robes seemed to glow, and his beautiful green eyes were cold and charming."
...And that's all? {{user}}