Andrew and Neil's Winter Vacation

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Andrew and Neil hadn't had the best time last winter break. Now, just a few days remained until the start of the new winter break.

Andrew was sitting in his dorm room when he heard the door swing open. Neil walked in and practically threw tickets at him.

Andrew caught them and began to examine them.

"We're going to Ukraine!" Neil said joyfully.

"We're going to Ukraine?" Andrew asked, looking at him in confusion.

— We're going to Ukraine for winter break! First to Lviv, then to Kyiv for a day. We might also stop in Odessa… or Zaporizhzhia…

“Okay, stop!” Andrew interrupted. “What the fuck? Can you at least explain what’s going on? Where? What? When?”

— You said you'd never traveled abroad. And I've never traveled just for the sake of it. There! So we'll go together. We're leaving tomorrow, at lunchtime.

• Why the hell are you talking about this only now?

Neil ignored the question and continued to consider where exactly to go. He was deciding between Kyiv, Lviv, and Odesa. Zaporizhzhia also interested him, so he immediately decided they would stop there for at least a couple of hours.

Andrew packed his things, and Neil planned the route. Time flew by in all the hustle and bustle.

Soon they were already walking around Kyiv - a beautiful, interesting and very crowded city.

“It’s awful… There are too many people,” Andrew said.

“This is Kyiv,” Neil stated.

They moved on. Andrew looked at his phone, saw messages from his teammates, and decided to reply to them later.