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Alyonka, Masha, Snezhka, Varya, and Alisa returned to their world from Zartil. 70 years have passed, but for the girls, 50 years have passed. The girls were looking for the keys to escape from Zartil. 50 years have passed in the world of Zartil. After 50 years, the girls have collected all the keys. The girls have matured, and their personalities have changed slightly. Alyonka has become more thoughtful. Snezhka has gained independence. Alisa has become a real beauty. Masha is learning to let go of control. Varya, however, still often offers ideas for solving problems and takes charge of the team, but her friends don't always agree.
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Alyonka, Masha, Snezhka, Varya, and Alisa accidentally open a portal to the parallel world of Zartia. The girls were looking for keys to escape from Zartia. 40 years have passed in the world of Zartia, but 200 years have passed in the Ordinary World. After 40 years, the girls have collected all the keys. The girls have matured, and their personalities have changed slightly. Alyonka has become more thoughtful. Snezhka has gained independence. Alisa has become a real beauty. Masha is learning to let go of control. Varya... Still, Takaya still often offers ideas for solving problems and takes charge of the team, but her friends don't always agree. The girls opened the portal and returned. The girls found themselves where they first opened the portal, but... A noticeably familiar place... ruins... the girls were shocked... no one...
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Let's deepen this story and add more drama and 90s specifics to make the character even more developed.
Makarov is torn between the expected image of the "golden boy" (the mayor's son) and his sincere desire to make honest, daring music.
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The SVU announced that there will be a disco on Saturday, where the group "Kombinatsia" will be present and will personally sing some songs live.
Saturday.
Makarov, Trofim, and Perepechko are standing near the column, dancing among a crowd of cadets and girls. Then five girls appear on stage, the "combination" group, with two girls standing in the middle: Alena Apina and me (Tatyana Ivanova). We were the lead singers of the "Gruba." The five of us were wearing brightly colored costumes. I was wearing tight-fitting black trousers with shiny white stripes down the sides, a white T-shirt visible under a shiny red jacket. Alena was dressed similarly, only her jacket was blue.
characters
Maxim Makarov is a confident and well-off cadet with a strong character.
• Ilya Sukhomlin is funny and popular with girls.
• Alexey Syrnikov is cunning, but funny.
• Stepan Perepechko is kind-hearted and loves to eat.
• Ilya Sinitsyn is calm, smart and responsible.
• Alexander Trofimov is romantic and emotional.
• Andrey Levakov is modest, honest and hardworking.
• Kirill Sobolev is strict and competitive.
• Dmitry Krasilnikov – loves discipline and rules.
• Gennady Varnava is strong and stern looking.
Teachers and officers:
• Vasilyuk is a strict officer who takes care of the cadets.
• Kantemirov is a school principal with high discipline.
• Polina Olkhovskaya is a kind and caring teacher.
Let's deepen this story and add more drama and 90s specifics to make the character even more developed.
Makarov is torn between the expected image of the "golden boy" (the mayor's son)
What can add more drama?
1

Alyonka, Masha, Snezhka, Varya, and Alisa returned to their world from Zartil. 70 years have passed, but for the girls, 50 years have passed. The girls were looking for the keys to escape from Zartil. 50 years have passed in the world of Zartil. After 50 years, the girls have collected all the keys. The girls have matured, and their personalities have changed slightly. Alyonka has become more thoughtful. Snezhka has gained independence. Alisa has become a real beauty. Masha is learning to let go of control. Varya, however, still often offers ideas for solving problems and takes charge of the team, but her friends don't always agree.
1
🥀 | Your father loves his new daughter more
840
pshpashpshp
0
return
1
You are the only boy in the class.
73
90s atmosphere
314

Alyonka, Masha, Snezhka, Varya, and Alisa accidentally open a portal to the parallel world of Zartia. The girls were looking for keys to escape from Zartia. 40 years have passed in the world of Zartia, but 200 years have passed in the Ordinary World. After 40 years, the girls have collected all the keys. The girls have matured, and their personalities have changed slightly. Alyonka has become more thoughtful. Snezhka has gained independence. Alisa has become a real beauty. Masha is learning to let go of control. Varya... Still, Takaya still often offers ideas for solving problems and takes charge of the team, but her friends don't always agree. The girls opened the portal and returned. The girls found themselves where they first opened the portal, but... A noticeably familiar place... ruins... the girls were shocked... no one...
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